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The Obligation is a short story idea about a beautiful clerk's confrontation with a male coworker that sends her gay lover off on a mission of revenge..

http://unusualadultpartyitems.tumblr.com/

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She seduces and beats him up.. but the confrontation doesn't stop there. She sexually brutalizes him.. vaginally.. on the face. Nearly smothering him to death.. and even after the lesson is learned, she's made a fetish out of him. A thing nobody in his proximity can believe..

Its quite the strange thing to be beaten up by a woman. And a beautiful woman at that.. he gets paranoid, and cries like a girl.

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The Coven is a short story idea about a face sitting website where the women conspire against one of the male victims in their videos..

http://whisper-town.tumblr.com/post/695231502

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Thru some disagreement about something totally unrelated to face sitting, they push themselves on him a little harder.. letting in a little less breath. And are more forceful to him.. and unforgiving. He's stubborn though, despite his vulnerability.. and tries to appease their sympathies. But it takes on a devilishly sinister onus.. and flirtation with his death. He winds up being the only one they want, by the way.. and normally these women are very pragmatic.. most people in the porn business are. But this.. conspiracy.. has a sex appeal thats.. well, lets just say that guys in trouble.

Have you ever walked into a crowded room of people you think you know, and all of a sudden, for no reason known that much to you, you're singled out? Segregated? Somebody said something prior about you.. something important, but that nobody wants to tell ya about.. and all of a sudden you're in a room with strangers. Well imagine if every last one of them people you counted on for the air you breathe.. and worse than that: its sexy to them.

Weird story idea though..

But in the end one of the face sitters corners him in a dressing room.. in orgasm. And he doesn't live thru it.. I can't even be 50 feet away from them.

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I also had a story idea about a cop who plays a dominatrix to try to catch a serial killer..

http://defrag.tumblr.com/

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His pathology has to do with his mother who abused him.. but he seems to target femdom dominatrixes in the prostitution district. She sets herself up as one, and aligns herself with his previous victims profiles.. but she herself has a pathology of her own. Not so much liking the femdom industry.. as much as she gets lost in the trade. Learning the many nuances and erotic methods to madness.. its a question of use. "What do you use it for?" Another area of undercover expertise she seems to develop an addiction to.. being not sex, but a weapon.

"I didn't fall for femdom.. I fell for vaginal role playing." Sex for most people is breathtaking.. everyone that is except for the people who dominate. To them, its experimental.. "I sit on their faces and I'm outside the box.. I move, and I flex, and position myself in ways I've never felt before.. while they struggle." Sort of stuck in the mud..

This guy she's after turns out to be a rich playboy.. leading a double life of being a humble, successful husband. He murders in fits of crying.. but the problem is, he's like a lot of people in that particular fetish. The name of the story would have something to do with being a baby.. "giant baby" or something like that.

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Amoeba is a story idea about a woman who has a genuine psychological disorder.. of projecting her own loneliness on her lovers, acting like their smothering blankets..

http://darkgypsysoul.tumblr.com/

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Ironically she can't orgasm.. instead, she plays this role of being intensely intimate.. to the point of the men she sleeps with, suffocated deaths.. Its an overwhelming urge and desire of self expression, not an orgasm, but a grotesque loneliness.. almost bipolar like. Of riding a roller coaster ride of being too indifferent, and then too intimate. The men she kills literally die of love..

Her camouflage is her beauty.. which people refuse to believe can be sinister, and sick in nature.. she has an endless supply of smothered victims.. she later hides from view when dead.

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